Across the Sands of Time

Across the Sands of Time

A Poem by LivingDeath

Could I have a lifetime wish
to steal the stars of endless bliss,
forget the pain that fills the sky
to find my home amongst your eyes.

Float atop the black hole sun
count the ashes one by one,
walk the oceans hand in hand
to etch our dreams across the sand. 

Reminisce the reveries
the painted perfect memories,
like peaceful sleep away from harm
knotted in eachothers arms.

For yesterdays were yesteryears
today lets live to feel no fear,
forget the pain that fills the sky
and find your home within my eyes.

© 2012 LivingDeath



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I loved the flow and rhythm of this poem. Beautifully written with a nice message.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Very nice! Well written, beautiful rhythm, great imagery. I very much like this. You really are a poet.

Posted 3 Years Ago


You write such amazing poems.. I loved this! thanks for sharing and I look forward to reading more.tc

Posted 4 Years Ago


A beautiful and hopeful poem.
"forget the pain that fills the sky
to find my home amongst your eyes."
I like the above lines the best. We need to release sorrow and pain. Open new doors of opportunity. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 4 Years Ago


Awesome emotional write. Carried me into land of joy and pain. Good work my friend:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


HI LivingDeath

I seriously don't know whether you understand Hindi or not so trying to express my emotions (not reviews) in english. There are two words in particular in hindi 'waah' and 'aah'. The previous one is used when something makes you feel happy. The another one is used, when something almost holds your hand and very swiftly drifts you into the emotions and makes you feel standing in the character.

What a writing. Stay blessed and keep up the beautiful writing

Regards
Prodical

Posted 4 Years Ago


beautiful write! Loved it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wow, just... Wow, blew me away, I really love this piece... Wow...

~A Risen Heroine~

Posted 5 Years Ago


I must be honest; I always look forward to reading your work, simply because everything you write has such beautiful flow and it means something to me. You have such a knack for words, I'm jealous. Incredibly. You have such a gift!

Posted 5 Years Ago


This is spectacularly beautiful. You are a very gifted writer. I absolutely love reading all of your work.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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