Jack and Jill (420 Edition)

Jack and Jill (420 Edition)

A Poem by LivingDeath

Jack and Jill went up the hill
to see what they could find,
What they found 
Was green and brown
That clearly blew their mind..

They looked at it, and will admit 
they took a little puff,
well Jack got high 
thought he could fly 
and Jill said what the f**k..

She grabbed a bud and smoked it up
her brain then went away,
what she saw
left her in awe
what more is there to say?

Lights would flash as colours clashed
their world was upside down,
Teeter totter 
Jack fell over
then rolled in what they found..

They laughed away a perfect day
as stars began to shine,
Jack and Jill
came down the hill
eyes red like yours and mine ;P 

HAPPY 420 EVERYBODY!!! xD

© 2012 LivingDeath



Author's Note

LivingDeath
If you dont agree, dont comment. Simple as that.
If you do agree, YOUR AWESOME! xD haha

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im giving this to the nursery rhymes publishers...kids these r gonna love this..best version yet:):).

Posted 10 Months Ago


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LivingDeath
LivingDeath

Abbotsford, British Columbia, Canada



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"I'd rather be hated for who I am than loved for who I am not." ~Kurt Cobain. I am who I am. 18 years old, a shadowed past, many scars; but I'm still here. My names Tyler and anything you want .. more..

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