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Rough Drafting a Song I'm Writing


A Poem by Malizzious!!!
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I just need to get it on an actual page instead of 'notes' on my iTouch.
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Here r the verses that have about 23 beats. The long ones. Haven't decided between that and short:

 

I want my world to crack open with the power of love and lust combined.

When we come together it's a sight that's elegant yet so unrefined.

I love how perfectly we both fell into Cupid's hidden design.

All those dark, sleepless nights I was pining and now just look. You are mine.

 

Then there's a simple chorus:

You're gonna be the death of me.

This, this I know.

But oh, what a way to go!

An overdose of ecstacy.

 

Then I tried simpler verses to pair with it:

Just one look from you makes my pulse jump in my veins.

Keep on working your magic, it's slowly driving me insane.

 

Then I fell asleep I'll work on it later today or tommorow. :) g'night.


© 2009 Malizzious!!!



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