Lamha pyar ka

Lamha pyar ka

A Poem by Penny
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A hindi verse I just wrote

"
Humein aapke labon se,
Labon ko awaaz se,
Awaaz ko alfaz se,
Aur alfaz ko jasbat se,
Tab pyar ho gaya
Jab aapne kaha ki
Aapko humse pyar hai...

© 2014 Penny



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Penny
Plz review.

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एक उम्दा कवि की यही खाशियत होती है कि वह बड़ी से बडी बात को बड़े सादगी से बो™ जाता है।
Ek umda kavi ki yahi khasiyat hai ki wah badi se badi baat ko bade sadgi se bol jata hai.
Impressive verse of heart mere bhai.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

3 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya. Aapka sadgi bhara review humara dil chho gaya.



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Nice yrrrr....kam words me bahut badi bat....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Penny

2 Years Ago

Thnx buddy. :-)
Brilliant, I like it. Enjoyed the rich language and the depth of understanding.

बहुत खूब, मुझे यह पसंद है। अमीर भाषा और समझ की गहराई का आनंद ™िया।



Posted 2 Years Ago


ह्रदयस्पर्शी रचना , कवियित्री.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Penny

3 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka :-)
Waah waah kya baat hai! Behtareen!
:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Penny

3 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka..
Accha hai .. taarif ke kabil.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Penny

3 Years Ago

Shukriya... :-)
एक उम्दा कवि की यही खाशियत होती है कि वह बड़ी से बडी बात को बड़े सादगी से बो™ जाता है।
Ek umda kavi ki yahi khasiyat hai ki wah badi se badi baat ko bade sadgi se bol jata hai.
Impressive verse of heart mere bhai.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

3 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya. Aapka sadgi bhara review humara dil chho gaya.
I hope you provide an English version. Bravo.......

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

3 Years Ago

I thought so but if I do the charm of the third last line gets lost. Thanks for the review. I hope y.. read more
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................
Kya baat ... Kya baat.....

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Penny

3 Years Ago

Bahot bahot shukriya aapka

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Added on June 9, 2014
Last Updated on June 11, 2014
Tags: hindi, urdu, free verse, cycle

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Penny
Penny

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