love

love

A Poem by Lydia
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valentine's day is only a couple weeks away!

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you are the stem

holding up everything meaningful in my life

my bridge over a psychedelic and frothy sea

of life’s indifference

the prologue to yesterday’s hopes

and the climax of today’s exciting story

a splendiferous orchestration

of all i need

in a word……love!

 


© 2015 Lydia



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hmmm I think Cupid is having it's way with you Lydi... LOVE, a 4 letter word that actaully makes the world go round and round or as you say. "a splendiferous orchestration" and its a soulful tune too... but you know valentines day is mainly for those who only love once a year, you on the other hand do love and get love 24/7/365... which of course make for very "nice" in your world and by extention ours!!! ~~redzone

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Lydia

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Love makes MY world go round.....and I hope it always will. Indeed, many only show the romance in t.. read more



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Love can indeed be expressed by a precious flower. Like how it is beautifully depicted in this lovely piece. Nicely written. 😊

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Lydi*
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The rising fluid of love to the brain that blooms this ecstasy :) beautiful

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

thanks so much, lynn. lydi**
This poem would make a wonderful note for a special someone on Valentine's Day. What I really enjoy about this piece is that you emphasize the union of the lovers in the flower metaphor. The stem has just as much important and meaning as the flower. Together, they are perfectly balanced. Your line "holding up everything meaningful in my life" is a perfect way to describe love.

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thank you, Clockwork....this was the Valentine I wrote for my husband. Lydi**
I don't think it has ever been said better,

(although, I have tried)

"a splendiferous orchestration of all i need"

Wow, I wish I had have said that......

You amaze. Trace



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Lydia

2 Years Ago

I think you just did! :) thanks again, my friend. Lydi**
Wow...breathtakingly poised and elegant, as ever...love is worded with grace here xo

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Poppy. Lydi**
Wonderful poem, I like holding up everything meaningful in my life.
Thank you for sharing this piece.

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Lydi*
Wow. I missed this wonderful write. I'm full of excitement after reading your orchestral melodies of Valentines. Excellent poem in its brevity...:)........

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. Happy Valentine's Day to you! Lydi**
Sami Khalil

2 Years Ago

You are welcome muchly...:).....
dear Lydi... One long stemmed red rose...
represents a love of strength and courage
to endure the high seas of romance...
renewed and devoted to lovely mango
sunsets and passionate wisps of eternal
bliss. truly... Pat

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, my poetic friend. Happy Valentine's Day to you and Roger. Lydi**
You must love to write as finely as this. And that is what it is fine in every meaning of that word.

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Lydia

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much. Yes, romance and love are my favorite genres for poetry. Lydi**
hmmm I think Cupid is having it's way with you Lydi... LOVE, a 4 letter word that actaully makes the world go round and round or as you say. "a splendiferous orchestration" and its a soulful tune too... but you know valentines day is mainly for those who only love once a year, you on the other hand do love and get love 24/7/365... which of course make for very "nice" in your world and by extention ours!!! ~~redzone

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

2 Years Ago

Love makes MY world go round.....and I hope it always will. Indeed, many only show the romance in t.. read more

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