Desperate Again, My Not- So- Friend?

Hmmmm. . . .

Desperate Again, My Friend?

 

 

 

'"Or be 'my' friend".'.

Oh, My friend.

Yet you have no chance again?

My friend,

Did she take 'Your 'Man' again?'

 

Yet my hospitality shan't come to an end.

I'll hug you, then.

She found out everything?

You so dare to speak?

 

Now the deceiver comes to me?

Oh, Deceiver of the Deceived.

Now you might just smile?

"What did she say?"

"Did she ask for your forgiveness?"

Oh, a merry laugh.

"Did she plead, or beg?"

 

How to say, I talked right back about you to her,

That I laughed and giggled,

Cherishing the time I wasn't away,

Shall I say,

Oh not so friendly friend;

That 'I took her back' again?

 

That the lies were to be crossed.

That they were;

Again and again.

Till' you find out I'm a backstabber?

My dear friend.

Lets not go down that row of knives again.

 

So you decide to 'Self Inflict' again?

I'm not that cruel, friend.

Shant, I wouldn't do that.

Simply, I just pull and trim.

 

"Yes, she did. And I told her 'F**k You'."

 

"Again."

Author's Note

Please note, that this is a made up poem; not real. Simply, out of no where. Please write reviews, on how I should strive to be a better writer, etc. Thank you.

Reviews

[Aludra]

This was very-well written. Like another reviewer said, I really liked how your rhetorical questions sound so hurt, and betrayed. I'm curious as to what you were thinking when you were writing this. It reminds me a lot about something on a personal problem I was involved with in relation to friendship.

[poetic soul]

brilliant! jus that!

Peace
Poetic Soul

[Last Lying Look]

This was amazing! I honestly loved this. It was brilliant. I'm adding it to my favorites!
Excellent write :)

-Elissa

[Forest Green]

Out of no-where yet from everywhere. You are a poet my friend...;)

Very, very interesting throughout. What an ending...!

Nice work...!

Daniel

[hayleyiraina]

i love your use of the word friend and how the rhetorical questions sound so hurt and betrayed. the thoughts seem very calculated which fits really well.