Where is my Superhero?

“Help, Help”

I scream but no one hears

“Help, Help”

again no one

 set up your signal

I still dangle from the ledge

 scream out your name

I’m trapped in a room with nothing but a rope and a chair

I need to be rescued

someone save me please

because heros don’t exist

at least not for me   

Reviews

[Hidden Happiness]

' Heros don't exist"- so true...when you are in trouble you are the only one who can get you out of it...great work....
oh and please read some of my stuff if you have the time..:):):):).

[Black Hole Halo]

silly wabbit, be your own hero! Everyone wants a hero, no one wants to be one, I read that recently somewhere here, and as I read this the poem becomes clear in it's intent...great job on this , so much emotion and no one seems to be listening.

[Max Earns]

In a world where everyone is crying out, it's difficult to be heard.

[Rhea752]

sometimes when you can't save yourself you need a "hero" reminds me of a song from Footloose " i need a hero he's gotta be strong he's gotta be fast he's gotta be larger than life" i sure hope you can save yourself :)

[Allie]

Only you can save yourself in that situation. It is a very sticky predicament to put yourself in. It makes me feel like you are seeking for help before you reach that point but nobody is listening and nobody is coming to your rescue. I hope that you don't find yourself in this place. Message me if you want to talk about depression.

[Daydreamer54]

Wow depression. The thing is to be your own hero instead of waiting for someone to save you because that's how the job gets done. great write about how comic books and fairy tales can mislead you.

[shawlyn]

Hi Mackenzie,
I like the poem. It definitely is about a cry for help. It is very emotional and thought provoking. I feel we all get to this point at one stage or another, but never really admit it to our selves. Please keep up the writing, as I feel you have lots to say.
Regards
Shawlyn

[Kaya]

I really like this, although i agree that some punctuation could make the meanings a bit clearer.

[Brittany]

I think that some punctuation would really drive home the emotions here.

[DarkShines]

Very good. I've felt this many a time. Down and out and feels like no one notices or just don't don't care. You expressed your ideas well here, keep it up