STILL FLYING

STILL FLYING

A Poem by MadalaJose



I am flying; it's murky
I can't see the way
But I am still flying.

© 2015 MadalaJose



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Beautiful! Three little lines that sing of deep faith. Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Beautiful,keep flying.Someday we will all soar;} Nicely expressed through very short words,but says so much in volumes.Keep fly though we don't see,God's hand will guides you through the murky shadows.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

thank you friend for the read and the review
You do not stop flying, you keep going even if the clouds become so snowy, we keep on going on.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

That's right. thanks for the read and the review
Seeing the bright side of things is what makes us move on. Nicely written, and thank you for sharing.

Insight.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I admire this great resolve.


Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

Thank you friend for the review
Determination.....we do not always know, for sure, but trying, relentlessly, enable us to find out.

Great writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

True, determination is the word. thank you
I agree, and the fact that the reader could relate to it in so many different ways I think makes it quites successful. Nice.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

thank you for the comment
Excellent positive image here madala. Unable to see but still awestruck at what you are doing. Well said in so few words.

Posted 2 Years Ago


MadalaJose

2 Years Ago

Thank you for the review

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Added on September 26, 2015
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Tags: Hope, Determination

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MadalaJose
MadalaJose

Brantyre, Malawi



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Christian. Poet. Writer. Student at University of Malawi, Chancellor College, reading English and Philosophy. Social Entrepreneur. Tech-preneur. I just love writing, experimenting with words and ph.. more..

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