I love you

I love you

A Poem by Magdelena

In my heart of all hearts, I say unto you
I love you.
Such simple words are they
Yet with more meaning than any other I shall ever say.

Thrilling, you once made me feel
Sunsets of meaning passed before my eyes
Moonlit nights, shown their rays upon my form
Then.. darkness..
So deep that blinded I became
Thrashing about, vines grasped within my thoughts
Holding tightfisted to all I posses
Releasing not a drop of sanity
Not an ounce for moment of rest.
My wondrous soul has for-passed all within
Now I am an open sore with no bandage;
to stop the flow of blood from seeping out.

I yearn for meaning to my pain
To answers only you can give
Like twine they hold bondage
My memories of you and I
To only set fire to all till they wither and die.
For my heart I gave, sent forth with trust
Yet you tossed aside
With not even a thought.
And I die.. Each second, each moment
For only emptiness stands instead
The vines that hold
Now gripping like steel.

To say I can go on
Oh such a lie
Falsity in itself for only my pride
To wander beneath myself
All unholy that is waiting for my mistakes.
Yet none I can make,  for they left along with my heart.
Nightfall has come upon me
I sit and stare
Yet you are not there.
Only the darkness reaches for me
To take hold once again
Of all I dream, of memories once shared.
Yet before it claims, I send forth my whisper
To hell with pride
For let me be the sinner. 
My darling...
I love you...

© 2011 Magdelena

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It holds the key to quality in bittersweetness and you know I love that

Posted 7 Years Ago

this was sad, but so moving and so beautifully expressed...nicely done...

Posted 7 Years Ago

this a heartsong eternal , emotional beauty in these words ~

Posted 7 Years Ago

O this is heart rending this brings the tears this is how a rejected lover/friend feels Twinie you have done a surpurb job here this has torn intio my heart!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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ooo this is a very melancholic piece, the emotions jump and fall - the bitter memories of "was" and "used to" and now the only the darkness reaching back!! very nice!! as always! ha

Posted 7 Years Ago

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