Grey Sun

Grey Sun

A Poem by Mark Mendoza
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https://youtu.be/xz2onkB_iCQ

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Lost in the deserts
of existence
As my skin burns like the plant life in the distance
A mirage

Swimming in the waves of the vast ocean
With the creatures driven by motion
In a foreign land

Circling space and time with wonder
Along with the grey sun over yonder

https://youtu.be/xz2onkB_iCQ

© 2017 Mark Mendoza



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Mark Mendoza
A poem along with a ambient tune . If you enjoyed like and subscribe to my grooving channel and you will see future content to come . Thank you .

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i like where you took us with this piece, Mark...

i felt the ride...just one thing...first line i read as "deserts"

with little here you allow us to see a lot.



j.

Posted 4 Months Ago


Mark Mendoza

4 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review,and catching my error .

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Mark Mendoza
Mark Mendoza

Marietta, GA



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My name is Mark Mendoza . I am a Musican and Writer . Thanks for checking out either. My Youtube Channel (https://youtu.be/yjYD_pQB6Fg) more..

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