Grey Sun

Lost in the deserts
of existence
As my skin burns like the plant life in the distance
A mirage

Swimming in the waves of the vast ocean
With the creatures driven by motion
In a foreign land

Circling space and time with wonder
Along with the grey sun over yonder

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words and thoughts. Took the reader to many places and thoughts. I like the poetry that make the reader think. This poem did. Thank you Mark for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like where you took us with this piece, Mark...

i felt the ride...just one thing...first line i read as "deserts"

with little here you allow us to see a lot.



j.

[Mark Mendoza]

Thank you for the kind review,and catching my error .