Jeanne's Song

Whisper soft
   and I will listen.
You graced my life,
   enriched my soul.

Time recedes.
Winter beckons.
Muted bells quietly toll.

Now on wings,
   your soul dances,
loosed of trapping
   and Earthly woe.

Beautiful spirit
   freed forever,
embraced in love,
   you gently go.

Reviews

[Tricia Pattinson]

Truly beautiful and so touching! Your imagery and words are together uplifting and soothing. A light in the darkness delivering peace.

[Sometimes Blood]

Oh my..this is captivating in its charm. i loved it

[Me]

wow this is so cleverly penned and so beautiful as well. This speaks volumes and I absolutely loved it

[Emrick]

What a magnificent way of describing a loss.
Brilliant job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft and tender words led the reader to quiet places and thoughts. I like the tone of the poem. It felt like a goodbye to me. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Wandering Minstrel]

Nicely done. Your message is so insightful.

[Mauricio Montoya]

This was something I needed to lift my spirits, love how this piece comes together.Thank you for sharing.

[Susan Beth Horvath]

I simply like what you have to say. This piece has good form and flow. Nicely conveyed

[Blake Fodor]

this is absolutely amazing..a very complex and introspective poem

[wordman]

a beautiful song of goodbyes and a song to remember