Birthday Blues

A Poem by Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Another year gone.

Secret wishes to candles;

to be young again.

© 2008 Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

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J. Hampton

Lol....been behind those candles !
"Secret wishes to candles;"....a keeper there

to the Point !

Blesssssssss

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wolfwind Words

perhaps we should just not have candles, Would that stop the aging process?
Or perhaps we should just used one candle eachtime, to strengthen the power of each yearly wish we make! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on March 10, 2008
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Melanie Jane Boicourt Shanks

Fort Wayne, IN

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I have been writing since I knew how. Before that I would just draw pictures to tell a story. My true passion is poetic lyrics. That is mostly what I am inspired to write. I have been dabbling in othe.. more..