baby steps

a poem about being a child

lights are bright

sounds are loud

there are always

new smells in a crowd

taste is intense

touch is real

I learn to be careful

of what I feel

I dream

I discover

I explore

and uncover

I learn something new

every day

I try to do things

my own way

I feel so much bigger

than this body I am in

it is hard to believe

that I fit inside my skin

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

lights are bright
sounds are loud
there are always
new smells in a crowd
taste is intense
touch is real
I learn to be careful
of what I feel
I dream
I discover
I explore
and uncover
I learn something new
every day
I try to do things
my own way
I feel so much bigger
than this body I am in
it is hard to believe
that I fit inside my skin

I HAD TO COPY AND PASTE TO SEE THE WORDS...A BIT HARD TO READ WITH THE FONT STYLE...YOU CHOSE FOR THIS ONE...SEEMS YOU DID A GOOD REPRESENTATION OF BABY STEPS IN THE LINES...AND THE ONE WORD USAGE WAS EFFECTIVE IN DISPLACING THE SCENE OF THIS VERSE...