For Starters, Give Me a Day

For Starters, Give Me a Day

A Poem by Melobldnfr
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...The freedom to come to count on one another without having to rely on one another...

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12/12/17

Can we be connected, but not tied?
In a relationship, but not so bound by tradition
That we lose our ambitions
In the outgrown
Before the ink's dry on the permission?
I don't want, once again,
Some codependent merry-go-round.
Without this I am peaceful and productive,
Not bored,
And high while grounded.

© 2017 Melobldnfr


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i think it`s possible and probable.
a relationship must start from the soul,
and based on complete trust

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melobldnfr

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much Wordman. I used to give complete trust in the beginning. I don't know about now, th.. read more
 wordman

6 Years Ago

yeah,once you get bit,it`s hard to give

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Melobldnfr
Melobldnfr

Wichita, KS



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