Will I ?

When I read your words;
Will I run from your kind?
Will I enter your world?
Will I loose my ground?
Will I take shelter?
Will I be any better?
Will I be lost in your hive?
Will I come alive?
Will you guide me ?
Will you discard me,
When you find me at odds,
With your words?

Reviews

[KCthelastboyscout]

Self doubt is relatable to everyone.but reading this it sounds as if you have already made a decision and now you're trying to talk your way out of it.that's relatable too.

[Mrudula Rani]

I am questioning the writer about the effects of his writing!

[KCthelastboyscout]

Ok.now I see what you're saying.thanks for making things clearer

[BlackPrince]

I love this.
As writers (serious writers anyway), we are aware of our audience (well, I believe the whole planet is my audience, because I refuse to limit myself or my scope). When you write a poem
(generally speaking), though you are true to your yourself, you do write each poem to have a certain desired effect, an insight, a moral, an awareness, a lesson.
As writers we must be in touch with the people,
being the voice for the voiceless.

WELL DONE!

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you very much.

[Neville]

Hey Mrudula, if I was a fierce critic, I would probably deduct a point or two and mark these words as fine or good, just because that's what fierce critics or envious ones might do. However, having studied your progressive development since arriving here, I have to say, you have come a long, long way and you should be very proud of yourself. 'Will I? is surely up there with your finest yet....All Good Things, N

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you Neville, and any ( criticism) advice from you has always been gentle and uplifting, I welcome it with open heart.
When I first started here I didn't know head or tails of writing on line. You gave so much support and treated me with so much tenderness ( probably comes from your professional experience) I will always treasure our friend ship. Um grande abraco!( very big hug)

[Mrudula Rani]

I have made so many typos; friendship and
Uma grande abraço , my excuse is that you got me very emotional!

[Neville]

I value your friendship too......Neville