Otiose

I don't mind hard work
It's the nonevent I can't
Subsidize myself to buck.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Dry wit wins all the time.. its when you're given full redin and still win that matters. Perhaps! Original thought still wins the day.. and night!

[Mrudula Rani]

Nothing beats originality! Agree with you. Thank you, my beautiful friend Emmajoy.

[emmajoy]

Yet more smiles flying your way ... ... ... :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Muito Obrigada ( thanks a lot).

[Paul Bell]

I like the idea of others working hard on my behalf.
But I don't mind taking the credit on their behalf.

[Mrudula Rani]

With that Charming personality of yours, I am sure others don't mind it at all!

[Paul Bell]

Okay, they've all went on strike.
Another trip to that bloody chocolate factory for the sorry box.

[Mrudula Rani]

A hug ( abraço) is more effective than a box of bombons ( candies) any time!

[Onlyme]

This made me smile and laugh. Love the originality of it all. And how you beautiful express yourself inside this perfect short poem. Bravo.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear Dawn. I appreciate your wonderful thoughts.

[CD Campbell]

Maybe one day we will realize all that supposed idle time was well spent. Your poem above was definitely not a waste of time. Love the originality.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you CD . Your reviews I treasure.

[Neville]

I dont mind how many of these
you write my good friend
I shall never tire of them

Top marks for presentation, composition and originality.....N x

[Mrudula Rani]

You always have such a wonderfully comforting words, dear friend. Thank you. Thank you very much.

[Neville]

I am so glad of that, and they are indeed true

[Mrudula Rani]

Uma abraço querido.

[Neville]

e o mesmo para você...

[Lyn Anderson]

Eu gosto quando encontro outras quem falam Portugues. No sabia ... que beleza

[Lyn Anderson]

Me descuple nao sei como usar lingua international no cellular

[Mrudula Rani]

Você tem que adicionar português no seu celular. Assim fica mais fácil para falar.

[Neville]

I am but a simpleton and am not allowed anywhere near a cell phone x

[Mrudula Rani]

Você está brincando!!( you are kidding!)
Boa noite meu querido .

[Neville]

Sleep tight M... x

[Mrudula Rani]

Até ( mais) amanhã!

[Neville]

tomorrow then :)

[Mrudula Rani]

Boa noite para você também Querida lyn. Você fala português muito bem . Foi uma prazer muito grande falar com você.

[Lyn Anderson]

Obrigada. Morei um ano em Recife em 1988. Prazer. Boa noite

[Neville]

small world innit.. night night Lyn

[Neville]

I kinda got lost up there.. but had fun along the way... x

[Mrudula Rani]

Bom dia Neville! ( good morning) it's always fun chatting!
Have a wonderful day, dear friend.

[Neville]

Absolutely, and you too M..

[Einstein Noodle]

i think this is an intriguing bit of word play and wry humor ... its all about the nonevent isn't it?! i will puzzle over this one for a while today Rani!
E.

[Mrudula Rani]

It is mostly wry humor! Thank you dear E, for your lovely comments. Hope you have a wonderful day and a great week.

[Einstein Noodle]

and same to you my friend :)