Eupnea

Earth administered
gulps of telluric fragrance
as spring spits pullulated.

Author's Note

Photo; clouds over the city. By Mrudula Rani (15/12/2018)

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Your posted image shows one really heavy blanket of cloud hovering, about to break forth in torrents over your city. It is a perfect match for your words Mrudula. You bring the cusp of spring to me and that is my favourite season. We are in the grip of winter here, so have a way to go yet. All good wishes.

Chris

[Mrudula Rani]

Our winters bring only showers and we haven't had good rains in along time ... this week saw two light showers ( I took that picture just before rain). Thank you for your lovely comments, Chris. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas and a very happy new year.

[Chris Shaw]

The same to you Mrudula, and your loved ones. Have fun and all the best for 2019.

[Paul Bell]

It's nice to know that your rainforest keeps the earth alive.
But I hear deforestation is changing this.
I should say stop it.
But since we industrialized over a hundred years ago, I won't.
Great photo. Still sunny.

[Mrudula Rani]

The deforestation is extensive and with the new government it might get worse... Thank you for the read .
Wishing you wonderful holidays and a Brilliant new year.

[Paul Bell]

You too, Mrudula. Hope Santa is good to you.

[Eilis]

What a very moody photo to accompany your poem. I love the way the clouds seem to be swallowing the city.

What I enjoyed most about this poem is that it contrasts so much with what I’m seeing where I am. The dream of spring hasn’t started to tease me yet, I’m still in my nostalgic state for winter.

But, your poem does a lovely job of tapping me on the shoulder and reminding me of the spring-longings of late winter.

Spring in all its blooming glory is a sight I never tire of beholding. I love the way you’ve personified the earth and its season here. Lovely work, Mrudula.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you Eilis. In northeastern part of Brasi( where we live) seasons are not defined clearly. Except for the rainy season. ( we haven't had good rains in a long while) it is always warm here and gets warmer in summer, in about a week summer starts.
Wishing you and yours a wonderful Christmas and a brilliant new year.

[Robert Trakofler]

wow, damn i'm dumbfounded what tremendous use of words holy smokes (no pun intended) this is great! bunny is gonna jump back into his stupid hole now lol!

[Mrudula Rani]

I think all bunnies are beautiful, ( I am an incurable animal lover... if given powers, I would like to turn the Whole world to vegetarianism) thank you very much for your extraordinary comments. You made my day.

[Robert Trakofler]

that's funny you say that I own vegetarian restaurant :)

[Mrudula Rani]

That is wonderful news! A Vegetarian restaurant is a great place to eat healthy and it is also good for the planet.

[Robert Trakofler]

I like how you think

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you.i admire your writing.

[Neville]

You are indeed a Mistress of words and both a fine mistress and of fine words... N:)

[Mrudula Rani]

You are the most generous, loveliest soul on WC, Neville dear. Obrigada querido.

[Neville]

cor blimey M.. you do have a habit of making a guy blush.. he say's blushing :) N x

[Mrudula Rani]

O prazer é todo meu ( the pleasure is all mine) desejo você uma semana de muitas felicidades! ( wish you a week of lot of happiness)

[Neville]

still am.... :)

[Sami Khalil]

Earth for sure has its own fragrances as it ushers in the spring of life. We all come to celebrate and administer our affairs that we share. Very strong brevity with word class choices.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you my dear poet for your beautiful thoughts. Wishing you season's best.

[Sami Khalil]

You do the same. You are welcome.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahaha i love your use of the language Mrudula! fantastic descriptive, action packed poem! i love it!! is it spring in your corner of the world?
E.

[Mrudula Rani]

Thank you dear E, for your delightful review. We are approaching summer ( 21 of December) and dreading it. Our spring started in September. Wishing you season's best E.

[Einstein Noodle]

ahhhh same to you Mrudula! :)