So Deep It Goes

So deep it goes

 

 

 

Love walks into our lives

masquerading a false bravado,

beseeching us to fall.

 

It withers

when unattended to,

it scars

leaving an indelible impression

like footprints in the snow...

 

so deep it goes.

 

 

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

Beautifully and succinctly written. Every verse states a truth briefly and matter of factly. The last one, the shortest, sums up the others in four words. Very well done.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you so much. The weight of your words leaves me with a smile!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i have too many footprints in my snow...

this is so well done...visual, impactful and with a perfect brevity to the lines and the piece..
the layout really enhances the theme.
j.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Thank you, Jacob. I wish for you a fresh blanket of snow through the coming year. May your heart be filled with the joy you give to others!

[Relic]

Scars is the only word that ever comes into my mind when relating to it. Yes, it goes deep and for some, those tracks never melt away.

Love your writing Kelly. :)

[Kelly Scheppers]

...so true, Tim. Thank you for the kindness of your words. Please know it means so much to me!

[Dave]

Love comes in so many forms. Entices us in so many ways. We need it, we long for it yet we to often fail to give it the attention it is due. It only goes as deep as we are willing to nurture it. Nicely done Kelly.

Take care - Dave

[Kelly Scheppers]

You have made my day with your kind reviews, Dave. Thank you!

[Dave]

Kelly - you make it so easy with writing such as yours.

Take care - Dave

[Alfred Kukitz]

Come into the deepness of enchantment where I hold your hand, look behind your eyes and softly kiss your soul. How you move me women!

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

I shall take that compliment to heart...thank you, Al!