Oh Beautiful Wonder

Oh Beautiful Wonder

A Poem by Aimee Mahathy

about nature <3


I love to watch
As geese roam in the field
Neath granite grey skies
To but nature they yield.

Into the trees
With their naked limbs high
Reaching for the clouds
Floating in the sky.

On ev'ry branch
Holding one bird or two
Who sing songs of spring
Summoning dew.

Those diamond fey
Who sleep neatly on leaves
Wings splayed on petals
So eager to please.

I hear a call
Of an owl of night
Forest's security, even I
Fear his might.

I love to watch
The flight of the moon
As it shines on wild geese
So far after noon.

© 2010 Aimee Mahathy

Author's Note

Aimee Mahathy
whoot. Got some inspiration! :D haha
And so I wrote this :3

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ohhh such a beautiflly writen piece of poetry. Stunninggg!!

Posted 8 Years Ago

beautiful work...! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

This seems very Romantic in content/scheme/devices...u even pull out the ellision of ev'ry..."to but nature they yield" is very strained syntax and makes me stumble a bit. And I was just wondering why you personify the forrest as male (which is interesting, almost German) while you don't personify the moon (labeling it "it")? don't know - kinda curious...I would've like for u to end it with night as oppose to noon, to fit more the Romantic Mode, but that's just me;)

Posted 8 Years Ago

Well THIS is a beautiful wonder! Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago

There is such a rich, living beauty you share with us here. This dreams and drifts around us, as birds fly in the light of the moon... Loved the feeling this brought about... wonderful peace!

Posted 8 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is so wonderful and ever so beuatiful. I like Nature and the call of spring around the bend. A very lovely write here.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on March 5, 2010
Last Updated on March 13, 2010
Tags: day, night, geese, field, nature, dew, fey, owl, moon, leaves


Aimee Mahathy
Aimee Mahathy

Bloomington, IL

It's been about 6 years since I've been active on here. I haven't stopped writing, but the frequency has changed a lot. I've experienced so much more. I think I was about 21/22 when I was last active.. more..


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