Amorology (the study of love)

Amorology (the study of love)

A Poem by Nish Nish the Fish
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not to be taken seriously :)

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Darling,

take this key of love,

And unlock the door to my heart.

 

And even if I bleed,

 as you cut through my aorta,

 

Your smiles will patch up my wounds.

 

And your essence

 will flow through my arteries,

 

And even if that blocks my hemoglobin,

 

Your voice

will carry the oxygen to my cells.

 

For you are the neuron to my nerve impulse,

The substrate to my enzyme,

The chloride to my sodium.

 

I wont be needing my lungs,

Cuz’ you take my breath away,

 

I wont be needing my feet,

Cuz’ you make me fly,

 

I wont be needing anything,

Cuz’ darling, you are everything to me. 


© 2011 Nish Nish the Fish



Author's Note

Nish Nish the Fish
haha...this was written for a "bad love poem" contest in my poetry class. I would never actually say this to/about someone lol

what do you think? favorite line?

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I think this is impressive! My favorite line: "For you are the neuron to my nerve impulse"
This is just awesome. Truly.
Also, I LOVE the use of medical terminology! I think that's what makes it so unique. And its not complex, its pretty basic terminology so I'm confident people will understand and read it just fine!

Posted 6 Years Ago


I like it
I think that it is a little confusing to some because of all the scientific terms, but I think that if you put it in layman's terms then it will be a simpler read and flow better, but I like what you've done with it

Posted 6 Years Ago


This is really cool! I love how you made love take the place of things that you need to live, and the in-depth detail was phenomenal! This is a great piece!

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Nish Nish the Fish
Nish Nish the Fish

Kansas City, KS



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I feel this deserves an update..seeing as i'm no longer 16 ;) Well, of course i still love writing poetry, I'm actually in a poetry class right now! It's dandy.. I like the color red, alot. I C.. more..

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