Risk It ALL

Risk it all

Into the night

Shadows that follow

Knowing my fate

 

Illusions so grand

Taking its toll

 

All I want is you

Leaving it all

Loving you enough to Risk It All

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is perfect Mysty! Oh how much control our hearts can have ... to the point that sometimes we're willing to just risk it all.

This flow is great!! Nicely done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Short and to the point... love is a risk and if you can't give your all then you already fail... and if you don't try then loneliness is your future... really love the power of this statement.

[soulsearching]

we all have the "Illusions so grand" but to take a step like that is so hard to do.

things that could be are always nice to imagine

love it.
tls

[Lori]

I like how we feel the thrill of the risk, knowing what the reward will be. Sometimes you have to throw caution to the wind....

[lauren emily]

This is beautiful. When loving someone, we risk it all and give them our hearts. Sometimes it doesn't turn out for the better, but sometimes it does. We never know, but we could never know if we didn't risk it all.
Awesome work,
~Lauren

[Adela Muresan]

Kowel.
Love really makes us want to risk it all just to be with our couple, you made it clear here.
I liked it that you chose to keep it simple.

A.M.

[Wicahpi]

Thank you for your entry into the "Poetry In Motion (2)" Contest!
Good Luck!

I like this very much! Good job.