Seashell on the ground

Seashell on the ground

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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Like a seashell on the ground.

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SEASHELL ON THE GROUND 
Like a seashell I remain on the ground,
Some notice and pick the best ones,
While some are left around.
I feel I am the left one which no one cares about,
I have been picked once,
But thrown back to the ground.
I feel I am the worst surrounded by the best,
Like a seashell which is lying on the beach,
I feel so alone untouched and beyond one's reach.
I still feel lonely when I have everyone around,
I am diving deep in my agony,
I am waiting to be found.
Care for me before I am buried in the ground,
Otherwise I would be merely lying,
Like a seashell on the ground.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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Thanks najam for sharing, when I read stories like this, I feel like I have to Improve my writings a lot.
Thanks for sharing 😊😊😊😊

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

I thank you very much for reading.
Your writings are special in their own way.
Rahul Bakolia

1 Month Ago

Hihi, thanks
That feeling of being cast off and left alone, but hoping for change, really came through. I liked the use of that metaphor.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much, it means a lot.
Oh my, this is just... Yep, I have no words. It's... Just wow, honestly. I feel the same way at times, not the best feeling, but you put it into such words that mean so much, thank you.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Ah! I feel sorry to find that you feel the same but I am happy that I gave you something relatable t.. read more
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Eva
You know when you read something and it's so perfect and makes so much sense that you wish you had thought of it first? For me, that's this poem. I wish I had even half of your talent. Great job!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Oh my god! You have no idea how much your words mean to me. Thank you very much from depths of my he.. read more
wow this is an amazing write, i remember darwin out of this poem about the law of segregation.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much.
sette

7 Months Ago

you are welcome
congratulations you won 2nd in my freehand competition

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

I thank you very much for awarding me.
This is really good! who knew Seashells were such an amazing analogy for life. This is so relatable and is an overall an amazing poem!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

It means a lot. Thank you so much for such insightful review.
Love this thanks for entering my contest winners announced next Saturday

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Okay. Thank you.
Seashells are beautiful no matter what - they weather the water and different seasons and tides making them stronger and withstanding- you will be chosen when time is right until then know all shall be well🌹

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

You are right. Thank you so much for reading.
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

7 Months Ago

My pleasure always🌹
The comparison! I have missed reading your poetry! Always have been so amazing!
Also, i have just created a new poetry competition and i would love for you to enter it :) Looking forward to reading your submission! Keep writing!!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for letting me know about the contest and thank you very much for such sweet words.. read more

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Added on February 3, 2017
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Tags: Seashell, sea, seashore, loneliness

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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