Charming sea

CHARMING SEA 

Another day awaits me,

At a place so breathtaking,

I am near the waves of the sea,

Blessed by another morning.

Azure water shines brightly under the sun,

It provides warmth to the sea.

Playing with foam and having fun,

The waves rise with utmost efficacy.

Adoring the blue water my day has passed,

I want to behold the sight of sunset,

I wish it everlasts.

Moonlight has dominated the sky,

Into darkness the night glooms,

I am happy with the thought of the sight of a morn,

In my heart happiness blooms.

Reviews

[Shweta]

Its beautiful. You created the atmosphere.
I hope you give some helpful feedbacks in future so i can improve more:)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading and sure I will. 😊

[Im His Daughter]

Your submission is now read in the http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Nature%2C-Auroras%2C-Lights%2C-Trees%2C-Water%2C-Outdoors-Contest/54059/ please stay tuned for the winning poems. Thank you for your entry.

[MarviQueen]

I love the sense of anticipation in this poem. Great job!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it ☺

[AshlynnStyx]

The imagery is astounding for such a short poem. I have never seen any really large body of water, being landlocked as I am, but I still find I can see the rolling water. Very good job.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Ananya Dubey]

wonderful imagery. ..... You've expressed yourself nicely. I love this poem.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing poetry for the sea. I love the sea also. My favorite place to be. I liked the description and the visions create by your words. Thank you Najam for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) Sea is definately a beautiful sight to behold.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree and you are welcome.

[APOORVA]

ahaa !!
beautiful lines
interesting

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Kush]

Nicely written, it followed the theme Blooms as well. Congratulations :-)

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much I am glad you liked it. Thank you for reading :)

[Farhan Shaikh]

That's really interesting piece of work..well written saher..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)

[Shasha]

It's really uplifting. I loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :)