Charming sea

CHARMING SEA 

Another day awaits me,

At a place so breathtaking,

I am near the waves of the sea,

Blessed by another morning.

Azure water shines brightly under the sun,

It provides warmth to the sea.

Playing with foam and having fun,

The waves rise with utmost efficacy.

Adoring the blue water my day has passed,

I want to behold the sight of sunset,

I wish it everlasts.

Moonlight has dominated the sky,

Into darkness the night glooms,

I am happy with the thought of the sight of a morn,

In my heart happiness blooms.

Reviews

[Sikandar Khan]

ohhhh Cute Describing OF NAture With Rise And FAll Of SUn...........

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am glad you liked it.

[Michael S]

Very innocent and calming piece to read.
love the use of glooms and blooms. Thought and its imagery is equally good.
Thanks for sharing.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much for reading :) I am glad you liked it.

[Valentine]

Very nice write, made me a bit jealous stuck here in the snow. Valentine

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :) I am glad you liked it. Someday I'll try writing about winter.

[Jenny]

A beautiful image!

I enjoyed reading this a lot. But something about the format made the flow stop and go. so it semi took away from the images that you create.

I also like how you use night and day, which really make your poem come full circle.

Thank you so much for sharing
It was a pleasure to read

J

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much :) I am glad I made you happy.

[Manu]

Nicely written, Saher :-)
As always sweet and soothing to read.
Good one. Keep them coming.

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :) I wrote this for a contest - 'Blooms'

[Manu]

All the best :-) I am sure you will win..happiness blooms is a very nice idea. I loved it.

[Najam Us Saher]

Hey I just wrote the same that you win for your another contest. What a similarity in thoughts :) by the way Thank you so much :)

[Manu]

Ditto :-)
Ya, I read that.

[Silmara McGarry]

Such sweet and enjoyable read...that makes the reader travel imaginary into this lovely poem.
So fresh also.
All best,
:-)
Sil

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you :) I am glad that it made you imagine and travel in the world of imagination.