Gifted words

Gifted words

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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We all have our own way with words.

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GIFTED WORDS
When I was suffering,
When I had no one by my side,
When I was silently screaming,
When I just wanted to hide,
I was gifted with words,
With so many thoughts in my mind.
When I wanted to end my life,
When loneliness surrounded me,
When I saw no cure for my strife,
When I didn't want myself to live,
That's when I weaved my feelings into words,
That's when I rose up conquering the floods.
When I had no hope of meeting you,
When I was sure I am no good,
I gathered courage and consoled myself,
I was stronger than before,
Because I had words to express myself.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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I like the struggle leading to logical ending.
"I gathered courage and consoled myself,
I was stronger than before,
Because I had words to express myself."
The above lines. True and worthwhile. Thank you Najam for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote



Posted 4 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

I am really happy to hear that you liked this. Thank you very much.
When I didn't think I was good enough?...I get what you are trying to express. One thing I do after I write, I do back weeks later and reread. I even make minor adjustments, if need be, in order to make things make more sense. Sometimes I do this without feedback. Love your writing style. Very talented.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. Your words really did meant a lot. I truly thank you. ☺
Its a good poem and the flow is clean. The line "when I was sure I am no good" doesn't sound right.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

I'll think for an alternative. Thank you so much ☺
Words are truly powerful. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Yes.....I thank you so much for reading ☺
Poetry and letting your words and emotions flow out, does wonders and can wind up making you feel a load better, because it just gets everything off your chest.
And bad feelings or good feelings there all emotions and when you make emotions into words and words into poetry, you make something beautiful.
Well done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Yes you are right. Thank you so much ☺
cimmy wuv xxxooo

1 Year Ago

your very much welcome :)
You have a gift many don't possess. Such creativity and conveying of your thoughts through words as you said. Beautiful work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words ☺
Excellent Work :)!
Loved it!
Thank you for sharing Najam :)!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much. Feeling widely elated to know that you liked it. ☺
Unique poem...too good!
Very well expressed..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate it. ☺
It is a blessing when our words can become our friends.

Great writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Yes. Thank you so much. I am glad to know that you liked it. ☺

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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