Your Existence

Your Existence

A Poem by Najam Us Saher
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30 June

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YOUR EXISTENCE 
You are miles far from me, we have to be this way.
Situation was such we had to be away,
You are my mother, that's all I can say,
I miss you a lot more today as it is your birthday.
I know not how you are,
I am yours yet you are far,
You left, leaving me with a scar,
And cause me to struggle in a never ending war.
All I pray that every happiness finds you,
And give you a chance to be renewed,
I can never understand the pain you have gone through,
Being far away, all I can do is wish you.


© 2017 Najam Us Saher



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This poem is combination of happiness and sadness. I have tried to make understand someone and pray for her. Nice job. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Zia

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Always happy to see you...Thank you very much 😊
Sad bt it shows...how kind u r.... ..... U r in pain... Still want hpyness for Other's... Nice

Posted 2 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

2 Months Ago

Yeah I am glad you liked this. Thank you very much :)
Brilliant, well done. :D keep it up

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much. ☺
"You left, leaving me with a scar,
And cause me to struggle in a never ending war."

Leaves the poem open for multiple interpretations. Nice one.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Yeah that's a unique thing about people. Many readers make many interpretations. Thank you so much f.. read more
Certainly brought me smiles as well as tears...
This one, i can say is one of your best pieces I've read...
Emotions striking right into the heart, she must be very happy reading this note from above...
Distance doesn't matter my dear, all that matters is the deep bonding you share which can never make you apart. I love this poem written with love...
Keep writing..
"Happy Birthday " to your mom...

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

I am overwhelmed to hear that. Thank you so much :)
It really means so much to me.
Misty

3 Months Ago

you're welcome
Very sad, but very beautiful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked it and understood the emotions behind it.
MaximumFlight

3 Months Ago

I almost lost my mother about a year ago, not to health or anything, but I feared her loss and for a.. read more
Wow You have Wrote For YUour Mom On The Occasion Of Her Birthday....May You Unites With Her Soon...........

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Not gonna happen...Thank you so much for reading.
Sikandar Khan

3 Months Ago

Believe In Allah ..........
beautifully written..keep it up girl.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked it :)
Wajiha Nayeem

3 Months Ago

always a pleasure....
Wow Najam. I don't know how to review this poem.I'm in loss of words. Amazing write. Happy Birthday to your Mom. Hope she could see this beautiful poem you have written for her.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

No...Thank you so much. I am really happy that you liked this :)
This is a very powerful/beautiful read, your mother is such a lucky woman to have you in her life as a daughter. A very happy birthday to your mom :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


Najam Us Saher

3 Months Ago

Oh thank you so much. You made me really happy :)
Joey Nizz

3 Months Ago

Your very much welcome ^^

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Najam Us Saher
Najam Us Saher

Hyderabad, India



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All the noises in my head, all the words unsaid, all the emotions and struggles I faced, all my feelings found a place in my poetry in the shape of words. more..

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