Unhappily ever after

UNHAPPILY EVER AFTER

Why is that every boy who loves truly

Finds a girl who doesn't value his love?

Why is that every girl who loves faithfully

Finds a boy who shows no respect for her love?

Why is that when both love each other truly

The world doesn't allow them to be;

Suppressed by the domination of helplessness

They stay apart and live unhappily.

23-9-17

Reviews

[Ardra]

They stay apart and live unhappily.....ever after ;) hehe... i find this very interesting Najam..
We are always bend of happily ever after we forget the truth of never getting them... its just a goal which seems so surreal..

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right, thank you so much for reading. I am happy that you liked it. ☺

[Zoya]

Well concluded. That really does happen. Nicely written, Najam!

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much.

[Zoya]

You're welcome

[Abraham George]

i am feeling so sorry for you.

this hurts. i am helpless here . But be strong and let the life flow. You will surly met him one day and then your life will spring

[Najam Us Saher]

Life will spring, very pleasing phrase. No need to be sorry friend, thank you so much for taking the time to read this. It means a lot. :)

[yuhee]

So very true. Not everyone could have a happily ever after.

[Najam Us Saher]

You are right. Thank you very much for reading. I appreciate it.

[Anshuman Aryav]

Simple but attractive....and beautifully written...
Keep writing..

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you very much :)

[zubia]

Simple and deep! That is what I loved the most about this work. ☺❤

[Najam Us Saher]

Thank you so much. It really means a lot. :)

[zubia]

No problem! I really loved it!

[Harley Quinn]

We all need to find someone who appreciates us for who we are. As well as the passion that comes with it. Stay positive, you will find true love one day. You never know she can be right in front of you and you may not even been seeing it.

[Najam Us Saher]

I am a girl.
You are right by the way, thank you very much for reading.

[wordman]

it seems you are right,i have heard this many times
love plays a game on us

[Najam Us Saher]

Yes, that's true. Thank you very much for reading sir.

[wordman]

ron,and you`re welcome

[Farhan Shaikh]

True words are mentioned...no words

[Najam Us Saher]

It's fact of life. I am glad that you liked this. You have my greatest gratitude.

[Sikandar Khan]

Excellent And Simple...Truely Connects To World Peoples.......Thats A Bitter Truth.......

[Najam Us Saher]

Exactly, I am glad that you understand and could feel the emotion. Thank you very much for reading.

[Sikandar Khan]

Why is that every boy who loves truly
Finds a girl who doesn't value his love?

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah I Can Feel Emotions, In this Poem My Situation Also Mentioned And Yours Also.....Wellcome