Him

The way he

Gazes at me

With his blue eyes

Lets me know 

I’m his one and only

The way his

Arms feel

Wrapped tightly 

Around my waist

Leave no doubt

He’s the missing piece.

The words he 

Whispers help me see

I’ve finally ended 

My journey

As he kisses 

My lips, All hesitation 

Takes flight

Making certain I know

Exactly where I’m supposed to be..

Is by his side.

Author's Note

I'm not sure if I'm finished with this.. any ideas?

Reviews

[Jeffrey Gershom]

I enjoyed this poem. Love strikes a cord in many dimensions: to see, to feel, to hear and to taste. Maybe add something of his scent when he embraces you to fill out all of our precious senses. Good job :)))

[Emily B]

I'm pretty sure it's finished, the poem and the hesitation

[Dream Weaver]

Very adoring so far Nancy, I with put another stanza in describing
what he feels about you, to kind of balance off your adulation toward
him. Overall still a wonderful write...

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the ending. Your words described a good place to be. The ending allow you to be there. A beautiful poem. When we know the love is good. Can't be no happier. A excellent poem.
Coyote