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Met My Match

Met My Match

A Poem by Marcello1013
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Crazy Love. Love Crazy. Ride together die together.

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Met My Match...
Fear The Poet

I think I finally met my match...

A woman down for whatever...

What's the catch?

If she saw me dragging a body...

She'd pop the hatch...

Ride off with me to a desolate pumpkin patch...

Douse the body in gas...

She'd strike the match...

Ride off with the biggest JackO' of the batch...

Couldn't lose if we tried...

Brad Pitt in Snatch...

That type of love...

We always got each other's back...

Fear the Poet
Met My Match.

© 2018 Marcello1013


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Interesting read that keeps that edgy underlying tone amped to generate the uncertain paradox the speaker seems to be toying with or subtly wresting with? The speaker seems attracted to the point of engagement, but there's still that little warning bell of the cost of such a union.

Nicely done, and all the best,

Lanny

Posted 5 Months Ago


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I’m not sure the “...” is needed in this , I like the theme about such a powerful bound that someone would do anything for you, but I feel like this could be developed more.

Posted 5 Months Ago



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Added on November 30, 2018
Last Updated on December 1, 2018
Tags: love, romance, happy, loyalty, heart, together, crazy, funny, psycho, fiction

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Marcello1013
Marcello1013

Brooksville, FL



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Father. Friend. Lover. Son. Brother. Coach. Empath. Loyal to a fault. 100% Pisces. Emotionally emotional. Selfless. Poetic, Real. Escapist. Learner. Overthinker. Anxious. Dog Lover. Hilariou.. more..

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