What Do You Drive

Just a bit of fun........

What Do You Drive

 

I said hey do you drive

?

She said only men wild

!

I said hey babe

.

Let’s go for a ride then

.

But she drove me away

&

Then brushed me aside

,

 Just like a flake or a crumb

.

I had nowhere to hide

.

I said hey babe

,

Let’s take a walk on the..

!

Too late she was gone

.

Oh well

!

It was fun while it lasted

xx

 

 

 

Author's Note

To be read with Lou Reed in ya head........

Reviews

[Mari' Emeraude]

hahah this was cute!! Enjoyed your poetic 'swagger'!

[Neville]

Thank you Mari, much appreciated...All Good Things, Neville

[Donna]

That was really great! I enjoyed reading that with Lou Reed in my head!

[Neville]

Thank you Donna, much appreciated.....and All Good Things to you...Neville

[tracey]

hi neville im new, just started to read some of your post,some funny great pieces loved this one it made me chuckle, you have great humor in your writing keep up good work Tracey

[Neville]

Thank you tracey, much appreciated & welcome...

[emmajoy]

You should have told her to take a hike!

This sad in its way.. but as ever great wording, great meter and a touch of .. gentle cynicism.

[Neville]

Thank you emmajoy, very much appreciated........N

[Lydia Shutter]

Love it...."take a walk on the wild side" was unsaid, but whispered by my mind as I read. Enjoyed the rhyming and the fun attitude here. Lydi**

[Neville]

Thank you so much Lydi**

[Norman 223]

It sounds like the Smart Alick was outsmarted. Hope it wasn't (auto)biographical, Neville. Loved the twists in this. Must catch up on Lou Reed though, I was probably too old in the tooth to appreciate his style........ I led a very sheltered life:-)

[Neville]

I suspect he was. Never too old for Lou Reed though Norman223 and many thanks for checking in, much appreciated........N

[barleygirl]

"Take a walk on the wild side" has been my lifelong mantra . . . I think it in a sing-song way, all the time! *smile* Your poem reminds me so much of my youthful inner bronc rider, I almost thought you'd written this for me! *wink! wink!* Thanks for inviting a fun romp! (((NUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Neville]

Funny that, I almost thought I had...Bless ya Margie & a big NUG back at'cha.........Neville

[Cherrie Palmer]

Lol, bad day at red rock
Loved it

[Neville]

It most certainly was Cherrie, it most certainly was but bless ya for considering these words, much appreciated, as always...........Neville

[Mrudula Rani]

It is very hard to get English CDs here now, a decade ago when economy was booming we could ... I am not familiar with Lou Reed. I loved the style of this writing the punctuation marks gave a new force .... and iam sure this never happened to you. With your gentlemanly manners, that wonderful sense of humor of yours, you are irresistible!

[Neville]

Hey, now I am really blushing, mark my words, oh and if you can check out Lou Reed on You Tube, especially 'A walk on the wild side' & his 'Perfect Day' .........N

[Mrudula Rani]

I will, thank you.

[Neville]

Let me know what you think.......

[Samuel Dickens]

Ha! Even before I read your note, I was hearing Lou Reed... dum-da-dum-da-dum.... Despite the agony of rejection, this one made me smile.

[Neville]

Thank you so very much my friend, my cup runneth over.......................Neville