I Still Love You

 

I can’t seem to take a breath

With out still thinking of you

Love was beautiful, joyous

Now I realize that was just you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bella-Marie]

Whoah! Lots of power in such short sentences. The only thing about short poems like these (Haikus included) is that the imagery may be beautiful but the words with have no depth, or vice versa. You Had awesome depth but no imagery. Other than that incredible and well done!