Flakes of Time

Flakes of Time

A Poem by Astro
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The icy lens of Time

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Physics tells us~
The faster an object is moving,
the slower time passes for it.

I love this idea.
The snow drifting down from the clouds
silently
drifting in formation
as tiny white paratroopers
reaching the soil as a blanket
a crystalline fabric
moving across the landscape
swift as the wind

Whenever one solitary flake
lands smack onto the tip of my nose
or caught in the spiderweb of my lashes
I focus my eyes upon it
locking my stare deep into its icy core
hoping
excitedly
transfixed on the idea
that there within it
among the glassy tree
I can witness the past

...and become a time traveler,
                  if only for a moment.

© 2014 Astro


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I want to see snow again, all those nostalgic memories came flooding back to me never has that happened before- unless I wanted them to of course. You sir, are amazing with a pen. Snow now has a much different perspective than it had before, it certainly never thought of it that way.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Astro

10 Years Ago

Well having grown up in a place with varying degrees of snow I'm afforded a particular perspective, .. read more
Oh this is really special Astro, you've captivated my thoughts on this frigid day. Time traveler for a moment, you took snow to a whole new level my friend! Impressive.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Astro

10 Years Ago

Well when you're surrounded by it it's easier to do I think. Thanks for the nice review Frieda.
Very thought provoking. Well done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Astro

10 Years Ago

There's plenty up here!!
sharonlee

10 Years Ago

Only a small area of Australia get snow, and though I have traveled 95% of my country I've never bee.. read more
Astro

10 Years Ago

I could take some of that please. ;) Although, I've grown up with snow so it doesn't really bother .. read more

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Added on January 7, 2014
Last Updated on January 7, 2014
Tags: Snowflakes, Time, Poetry, Physics

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Astro
Astro

Vancouver Island, BC, Canada



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