For 90 Summers

For 90 Summers

A Poem by Nipplegrinder

I knew I'd love her
For 90 summers.
Through the storms
In her darting eyes
Through the tornadoes
Swirling in her chambered heart.
Through the chills on
A brilliant, bright day.
I knew I'd love her
When she saw this boy
And stared back
And smiled sunshine

© 2017 Nipplegrinder



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In her darting eyes
Through the tornadoes
Swirling in her chambered heart.

beautifully done.... :)


Posted 6 Months Ago


Love has a way of turning our blood into wine, and we become completely inebriated from it. Our vision becomes rose colored and beauty is magnified. Would that all of life for all our days could be such bliss. Love the sunshine of her smile!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Months Ago

Absolutely, dear girl. You are wise.
Wow, this was strong; very solid stuff. Loved the title, and I came in with a faint idea of what the piece might be about, then you took it and made something fantastic out of a light expectation. I really, really dig this!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

6 Months Ago

Thank you, my friend. I'm deeply humbled by your compliments. The fact that you added this to your f.. read more
nothing like love that lasts...my folks were married for 70 years...i wonder what that is like...

j.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Nipplegrinder

6 Months Ago

70 years. That's a milestone. And, yes. I, too, wonder what that's like.

Thanks for t.. read more
Passion shows through in the words 90 summers alone. I also like the lines pointed out by Silente. This is good stuff. :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

7 Months Ago

Ahhh. Thank you, my friend. I truly appreciate that.
That is quite good... Like, wow... Tornadoes of swirling chambered hearts... Sunshine in darting eyes... 90 summers later... This will still be a classic write...

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nipplegrinder

7 Months Ago

I'm humbled by your compliments. Thank you so much, Sil.
Silente

7 Months Ago

Nah... I am humbled by your skill... Totally deserves more reads... But you are welcome, regardless... read more
Nipplegrinder

7 Months Ago

Even still, I truly appreciate it.

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Added on October 31, 2017
Last Updated on October 31, 2017
Tags: love, desire

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Nipplegrinder
Nipplegrinder

St. Louis , MO



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50 year old Gentleman. I write a lot about love. And I write about BDSM. I love to write erotic poems. But, I like to think I do it in a tasteful way. I like to read and review the works of the many.. more..

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