No land

No land

A Story by Nourhan
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It's kinda short , but read it anyway

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She is living in No land , where everything is destroyed ;
She has created to fight 
But out of the battlegrounds 
She is fighting for maintaining 
She is  fighting for completing 
She is  fighting for understanding 
She is fighting for even breathing. 


© 2017 Nourhan



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Nourhan
Tell me what do you think? "

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I am fighting breathe even after understanding the maintaining completion of this poem, heh... Penned between no-mans land and oblivion...

Posted 4 Months Ago


This is well written. You got good taste in choosing what words to fill the blanks. Great job!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thanks 😊😊😊😊
I can actually relate to this.."she is fighting for understanding"
Really well written !!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thanks pia 😊😊 i appreciate it
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This is so beautiful. Says so much in few words

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much bella appreciate it :)
I can tell I like something when I want to write something about it. This was to the point, and it had a powerful progression, "She is fighting for understanding, She is fighting for even breathing." Excellent.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thanks for your kind words chris :)
Chris

5 Months Ago

You're welcome.
It seems like girl fighting for life, I loved the way you said it....:)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Nourhan

5 Months Ago

Thank you 😊😊 appreciate it 😀

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