No land

It's kinda short , but read it anyway

She is living in No land , where everything is destroyed ;

She has created to fight 

But out of the battlegrounds 

She is fighting for maintaining 

She is  fighting for completing 

She is  fighting for understanding 

She is fighting for even breathing. 

Author's Note

Tell me what do you think? "

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful and worthwhile poem. In our world of so many misplace and homeless people. The poem hold great meaning. Thank you Nora for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Nora]

You're welcome 😊

[Chase Dylan]

I am fighting breathe even after understanding the maintaining completion of this poem, heh... Penned between no-mans land and oblivion...

[Hiraeth]

This is well written. You got good taste in choosing what words to fill the blanks. Great job!

[Nora]

Thanks 😊😊😊😊

[pia]

I can actually relate to this.."she is fighting for understanding"
Really well written !!

[Nora]

Thanks pia 😊😊 i appreciate it

[bella]

This is so beautiful. Says so much in few words

[Nora]

Thank you so much bella appreciate it :)

[CMC]

I can tell I like something when I want to write something about it. This was to the point, and it had a powerful progression, "She is fighting for understanding, She is fighting for even breathing." Excellent.

[Nora]

Thanks for your kind words chris :)

[CMC]

You're welcome.

[Surya]

It seems like girl fighting for life, I loved the way you said it....:)

[Nora]

Thank you 😊😊 appreciate it 😀