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MOM

MOM

A Poem by Ov3R_sKiLl3D
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Its a poem about a lady who like to talk with us and hope to spend her life with her.......

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There are Angels God put on this Earth,
Who care for us and guide us;
You can feel their LOV3 and gentleness,
As they walk in our life beside us;
they do great things for us every day,
They whisper in our ears and tell us what to do;
they hold us in their H3ART and LIFE,
When we are all filled with our FEARS;
God blessed me with an Angel,
i am proud to call her own;
She has been there throughout my life,
protected me from the dark and bads;
She guided me the best she can,
and We call that person a 
                   MOM

© 2015 Ov3R_sKiLl3D



Author's Note

Ov3R_sKiLl3D
This was a poem i wrote in grade 9, hope you guys are gonna like this ............... :)

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I agree. A beautiful poem for mom. You honor yourself and mother with the amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind words ...... :)
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome. Anything about dear mother. I will read.
I love it!!
I read it to my mom, she loved it too!
Keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your review =)
It's a beautiful poem about our mothers, they are truely angels
Beautiful poem!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

thanks for your awesome review.............. =)
Lizardo

2 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Hey!! I'm C.G.
Sorry for the late introduction... :p
I love music and have a passion for writing, so yeah! xD You can learn more by reading my profile:)

I really like your poem! I think you have talent! Keep on writing and you'll get better. I've definately improved I'm the last couple months. You can check out my writing if you'd like or read some of my earlier pieces which are not as good as the ones I write now xD
Feel free to send me read requests or messages anytime! I'd love to help in any way by reviewing, reading, suggesting, answering questions, or just talking in general:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ov3R_sKiLl3D

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your review and keep connected =)
Cool Girl

2 Years Ago

Twas a pleasure :D
I like this one, it's sweet. =) I do suggest that you capatilize each word at the beginning of each line. It's not that big of a deal...just a grammar thing. Nice work though, I want to read more...keep writing!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


The StoryTeller

2 Years Ago

Oh, by the way, this is my friend I was telling you about. :)
The StoryTeller

2 Years Ago

The one who wrote this.
I liked it Salman, although, I think that you meant "call her my own" not "call her own". I think it was good. And if this is something you wrote in grade 9, where's your work now? I'd like to see some more writing, as of current. And since you're my best friend and go to school with me, I won't leave you alone till you do. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


The StoryTeller

2 Years Ago

I've never sent read requests for anything other than my own work so...
luvs2write

2 Years Ago

Yes, you did it right cuz I got one.
The StoryTeller

2 Years Ago

Okay, sounds good. :D

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Added on January 29, 2015
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Ov3R_sKiLl3D
Ov3R_sKiLl3D

Worthington, OH



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