No Longer

Re-written

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Ruth]

Oh hon...these made me tearful...
Share a glance of empathy where all else seems void :)
♥

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Sweetness..this is one of my personal faves! xoxo

[Muse]

So you wrote this two years ago? Look at how far you have come. A new chapter will be written for you. And I hope this chapter is filled with love...peace...joy and happiness. xxoo

[Dream Weaver]

Look how far I've come and how much further I have to go.. xoxo

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

God Joe, I have missed your work! Must visit more. This was crafted with so much of how things are today in people's lives!

[poetforlife]

My DEMISE AN EMOTIONAL HEART....brilliant. I know that demise all too well. This poem envelopes all of the sadness of one so longing to be loved and yet at the mercy of another. Reading it felt like a sorrowful blanket slowly wrapping around me. Beautiful and tragic.

[Dream Weaver]

Thanks very much PFL, I appreciate your personal thoughts and for taking the time to read deeply into it...

[Nautili]

Vulnerable and beautiful. The heart has many stitches...sometimes under the strain they burst open....

[Dream Weaver]

Thank you Nautili, I appreciate your kind review. :)

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I love this! We all want to be healed by truth and trust, but it's rare...it's rare.

[Dream Weaver]

In this day and age rare is the correct word Lynn, thanks for the read... :)

[Auby Faith Evans]

i liked this a lot. its really honest.

[Wolf]

very nice write keep it up

[deeps]

For now we wait, wishing praying for
a better tomorrow. Yesterdays bring
only pain and memories of desolate
acts of desperation and despair.

I really liked this stanza. This is an amazing write.
Very thought provoking write.

[Liza]

a broken heart asking for healing through an outside source
it happens lots
hopefully we dont use it as a crutch
to break another heart
thought provoking write