Blood Red

Blood Red

A Poem by PandaPeaceful

Bite into my flesh and find nothing,
Crumble my bones and lose control,
Pull my eyes. and your mind will swallow,
Carve my skin, and I am gone.

But beware. 
For my life is one you have taken.
For your hands are stained,
Blood red, you encounter them.

You shall scream and vanish,
because mistakes seek revenge.
Your body, will be slaughtered.
Piece by piece, you will burn.

© 2017 PandaPeaceful


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PandaPeaceful
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Your words are true. I have known men who had killed. The killing become part of them. I was a soldier and I saw hopeful men become cold and stone-like after taking life. You are right. The blood never leave your hands. Thank you dear friend for sharing the powerful piece.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

6 Years Ago

You have seen much sorrow. I thank you for reading this piece.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.



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Your words are true. I have known men who had killed. The killing become part of them. I was a soldier and I saw hopeful men become cold and stone-like after taking life. You are right. The blood never leave your hands. Thank you dear friend for sharing the powerful piece.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

6 Years Ago

You have seen much sorrow. I thank you for reading this piece.
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
I like it. Although it's brutal, it's a good kind of brutal!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

6 Years Ago

Thank you! And, it truly is.
Hell yeah I enjoyed that. It gave me chills down my spine, and seemed to call out to the monster within me. Thank you, it was beautiful and the descriptions were out of this world!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

6 Years Ago

Thank you! I appreciate your review Maia!

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Added on October 13, 2017
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