Blueberry Muffins

Blueberry Muffins

A Poem by PandaPeaceful

They rise and fall,
like a constant motion,
ready to destroy and 
sacrifice their own.

Velvet runs down the fairness,
enveloping beauty in its very form.
For screams erupt as the smoke gathers.
No more war between them.

One by one,
they vanish.
Devoured by soiled mouths-
And so, the whispers begin.

© 2017 PandaPeaceful



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Being a more straightforward thinker, I do not always grasp the many layers of your message, but I love the way you craft your words. I expected the delicious title to lead to something sweet & I find it ironic that you are serving up something seemingly melancholic. I like when writing is far from predictable, even if it's not my strength to analyze such expression. Thanks for helping me stretch my boundaries (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

1 Week Ago

I understand where you're coming from. Sometimes one just looks at words, and finds no meaning to th.. read more



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Being a more straightforward thinker, I do not always grasp the many layers of your message, but I love the way you craft your words. I expected the delicious title to lead to something sweet & I find it ironic that you are serving up something seemingly melancholic. I like when writing is far from predictable, even if it's not my strength to analyze such expression. Thanks for helping me stretch my boundaries (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

1 Week Ago

I understand where you're coming from. Sometimes one just looks at words, and finds no meaning to th.. read more
A sad poem about what should be such a delightful feast! A two-way metaphor...

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

PandaPeaceful

2 Months Ago

Indeed. Thank you for the review!
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on November 12, 2017
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