Until Friday

Until Friday

A Poem by Chloe..Across the Universe

It is only till Friday I say
Count the days
His voice like an angel

Don't cry, I say
I will call every day
It hurts to speak
My trembling voice

Ring, ring, ring
Hello, yes, he is ready
Will be there shortly
His smug voice

Daddy's on his way
His eyes look into mine
I see the tears
His sea- blue eyes

His hand in mine
We walk outside
He watches each passing car
His sad boy eyes

There he is , I say
I feel his hand tighten
His little boy voice

I love you, I say
I love you too
Five days?
His voice echoes

Five days, I say as they drive away

© 2012 Chloe..Across the Universe

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This is a wonderful story! I saw each scene vividly, felt the nervous knot, the welling tears, and the summoning of a little boy's bravery.
Excellent work here.
I've waited awhile to read you again...Welcome Home!

Posted 6 Years Ago

I like the thoughts of the young minds. I like the use of numbers to strengthen the story. I look forward to read the story to follow. Thank you for the excellent poem.

Posted 6 Years Ago

awwww sweet

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Chloe..Across the Universe
Chloe..Across the Universe

Smalltown, USA, AR

Sometimes i feel like an alien in a strange land..can you relate? I love people and friends are just that to me , friends-if you request me as a friend it would be nice if you read something I have .. more..


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