Moonlight Dance

Moonlight Dance

A Poem by Paul

So full of promise,
Right from first glance,
The casting of shadows,
That made the moonlight dance,

An evening of balmy tropic breeze,
And a thunderous dark sky,
No words need spoken,
It would not be the last good-bye

Only our hearts to guide us,
Separate lives divided by the sea,
The deepest part of our souls remain open,
Never faded by degrees,

A gift that was given that night,
From up above the clouds,
Having never felt this way,
Always surrounded by crowds,

The distance has been overcome,
Standing tall without measure or fear,
On this path we've chosen,
This sunset horizon looks all so clear.

© 2017 Paul



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Oh the weather can do so much! It bviosly inspired you to wite this very clear and readable lovely poem!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
A holiday romance that endured told in a bright, descriptive piece

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thanks John. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
a beautiful poem of love,enjoyed

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 wordman

7 Months Ago

my pleasure
I enjoyed the phrase and view of "moonlight dance". Nice flow and a calming sound that true love makes in the hearts of those involved. Beautiful.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I'm happy you enjoyed this.
'The casting of shadows that make the moonlight dance', lovely! I.I.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Isabella Ivy

7 Months Ago

Hey, I think you need more encouragement and exposure here. You're not shy to read and review? I pic.. read more
Paul

7 Months Ago

Great idea you have. I think I will try that as well :)
Isabella Ivy

7 Months Ago

:):):):):)
Great imagery and synesthesia here. I especially liked the second stanza with the "balmy tropic breeze". The poem is relatable for anyone who has been in a long distance relationship, and it is beautifully written.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words. I look forward to reading some of your poetry as well.

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Added on March 15, 2017
Last Updated on March 15, 2017
Tags: Love, chance, romance, rhyme, Together

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Paul
Paul

Ontario , Canada



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Writing has been a passion of mine, ever since I started taking it seriously about two years ago. My poetry is a constant work in progress, in which I strive to succeed more so every day. Your cons.. more..

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