A Lovers Dream

A Lovers Dream

A Poem by Paul

A walk through a summer meadow,
  Barefoot along the velvet grass,
A subtle glance in her direction,
  Wishing this moment could last,

Under a lush beech tree we lay,
  Surrounded by a warm gentle breeze,
She whispers softly to me in my ear,
  You need only put your trust in me,

Words of love poetry are read aloud,
  Beneath this natures shade,
Serving us with simple reminders,
  Of the promises we both made,

As the day turns to dusk,
  The stars in the skies never looked so clear,
If I should awake from this dream,
  Before my eyes, I hope you appear.

© 2017 Paul



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Oh Paul this is really sweet and beautiful at the same time it spoke to my heart with a tender feel any woman would cherish to have and it is like you wrote your words to me in the last two lines sigh, your mind is that of a gentle and romantic poet's it feels so warm I love it -- thank you! :)

HUGGS!
Sammi

Posted 3 Months Ago


Paul

3 Months Ago

Oh sweet Sammi, it is I who is full of gratitude towards you. Especially after reading another one o.. read more
Wow...I liked the dream like reality
If it has to be a dream let it be with you...always with you...that's what the beating heart of a lover always wish for!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a pleasure to write.
i could feel the passion in this write,feeling love and serenity

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you for reading!
 wordman

7 Months Ago

my pleasure
How beautiful and romantic.
So I think I get this, because at the ending you said I hope you appear. So you where more like dreaming in the poem.
I liked that it rhymed a little, I think rhyming poems are more poetic.
There is heaps of feeling to this poem, such much love, and passion. I really enjoyed it keep writing Paul :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kindness. It is comments like yours that only inspire me to write more, t.. read more
cimmy wuv xxxooo

7 Months Ago

Your very much welcome. So you should be inspired to write always :) writing Is an amazing thing. An.. read more
This was full of lovely imagery for me --
is it supposed to only be a dream? or are you implying this reality is dreamlike?

Posted 7 Months Ago


Paul

7 Months Ago

I would say the reality is dreamlike. But for the reader, you can interpret this in any way you choo.. read more

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Added on March 20, 2017
Last Updated on March 20, 2017
Tags: Love, dreams, rhyme, alone

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Paul
Paul

Ontario , Canada



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Writing has been a passion of mine, ever since I started taking it seriously about two years ago. My poetry is a constant work in progress, in which I strive to succeed more so every day. Your cons.. more..

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