Springtime ~ The arrival of

Springtime ~ The arrival of

A Poem by Paul
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A short poem I wrote today about the arrival of spring.

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The warmth of the new season,
Shines tenderly against my face,

Oh, how I have anxiously awaited...
For this new sun to rise,

This taste of nature's heaven...
Paving the way to a cold winter's demise,

Trees blossoming their multitude of colours,
As leaves blow gently in the clement breeze,

Sounds of spring are echo'd in the distance,
As an old man passes by, whistling his buoyant song,

All while these thoughts are captured,
Under the radiance of a cloudless blue sky.

© 2017 Paul



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Hi, Paul,
There are some wonderfully beautiful descriptive expressions in this piece, filled with Springtime wonderment the heart can appreciate, and I especially enjoyed some of the gently appealing ways you’ve portrayed this season of rebirth, with the wonders of color, texture, and warming emotion.
On the techy side: Lines counts could be more even, fixing a slight hitch in flow, and that, though gorgeous and touching words were used, the syntax may have been better arranged … just my observations for a little refinement, if they might prove helpful in some way, and if you’d like a hand, just let me know.

Overall, Paul, this is quite lovely, well put, and memorable …
thank you for sharing your fine efforts, my friend! ⁓ Richard : )


Posted 4 Months Ago


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Zoe
This is as wonderful as the season of spring itself! I could feel your words. Truly enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your visit and kind review!
Zoe

5 Months Ago

No problem!
Aloha Paul, lovely poem. There's a gentle hum to this writing. Expectant with all the delights of spring. Izzy

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words, Izzy. I appreciate your visit.
Island Hippy

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome
Yes, this is a lovely poem... your words say it so well, wonderful Spring! (You also must be in the Northern hemisphere!)

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Indeed I am. Thank you for your visit and kind review!
Great Aunt Astri

5 Months Ago

It will be good to get into the garden ... and get new inspiration?
Paul

5 Months Ago

Yes, it certainly will! Inspiration is what I'm lacking lately.
spring,the birth of the universe,beauty and the warmth of life

Posted 5 Months Ago


Paul

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your visit, my friend.
Seasons though an annual phenomenon, always stir us up and leave us awed sometimes. I loved the way you have welcomed the season. Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing, Paul.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words. I appreciate the visit.
I love the spring, simply for its renewal of life, of all nature. It seems to do something to us, as well, doesn't it? Suddenly, everything is beautiful again, and life is a stroll down a sidewalk you've walked a million times...ahh, but the flowers are in bloom now!

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

It almost makes us feel alive again! Such a wonderful time of year. Thank you for your kind review!
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Gee
Sweet, I love spring, the cold of winter finally ceding to an ever warming Sun and new life bursting with colour and sound. Like this Paul

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind review. I appreciate the visit.
i feel the warmth of new life through these words...a reawakening....the frozen tundra becomes a rain forest of growing....

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

My thoughts exactly. Thank you for your kind review Jacob.
I can picture myself under the shade of a tree while reading this. The bids chirping is like a wake up call. "Spring has arrived."

Nicely done.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Paul

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind review Relic. I appreciate the visit.

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Ontario , Canada



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