In Season

 

Long ago I fell in love with seasons
and pitched a soft woo to greenery,
to snow, to leaves leaping in a colorful
death, the way I would like to go

These days I slow my pace and gentle
dearness into my voice
I listen to the rain in ballads and think
the snow a lovely white game

Sometimes I am a daffodil
well past the yellow fluff of flowering,
my heart and head separating in pieces
seeking only to rise, to fly

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

These sound so much like my own thoughts that I may glean more meaning than what sits on the surface. It's all about life and where we are. Lovely and meaningful.

[Mary]

this is beautiful in so many ways!!! I love the first two lines. Thank you for expressing so well what is in my heart.

[Helena]

"Long ago I fell in love with seasons".....what an interesting thought and beginning of your poem. Very lovely Phibby! Much enjoyed.

[celyn]

This is beautiful. I have a feeling that those last four lines are going to stick with me for a long while.

[Ken Simm.]

Superb description of the season's colour and if it comes to that moods. Moods that infect only the true creative in such a way.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

that is so tranquil and charming... All aspects of nature is a miracle and when we become one with it there is nothing we can't do.

[Donald Meikle]

Ah but the village poacher is often a hero.
and these Summer winds are rising breeze
Singing of rain
Not yet Phib
Autumn leaves must color

[Ed Hart]

oooh, a soaring phibby, a soaring phibby, a wonderful soaring phibby

[Emily B]

oh, Phibby, it's such a gentle, tender voice

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