Synapse Contemplation

Synapse Contemplation

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Synapse - The point at which a nervous impulse passes from one neuron to another

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Synapse Contemplation




Pulses of flickering imaginative reality

And instances of my loving actualities

Awaken dormant neurological pathways


In the synapse repose surfeit dreams

A multitudinous supply of aspirations

Driving guardant this searching soul


The brevity of one's earthly lifespan

Compared to infinity of time and space

Promotes demand to exploit my gifts


Perchance this refreshing evaluation

Will consciously raise internal psyche

And benefit each touched soulmate


Thus I travel in respective steps

Along a humble measured meridian

And give more often than I take


Phillozofee @ 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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There's always something to learn in your writes. In this case, it reminded me of my first year in med school, I literally hated neuroanatomy lol ;p
Love how you ended this one. Give more often than I take... makes me wonder if this really happens still...
Excellent write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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This is beautiful, and perhaps a even more amazing fact that the universe looks like the nervous system, and life pulses through with every breath and nanosecond the light travels along humbled meridians and startled parallels... quite breathtaking :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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You are speaking meh language, friend... If only I could get away with such fanciness... Alas, I can not, not with this style and flair... Masterfully penned... Seriously...

Posted 2 Months Ago


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I love your writing style. This piece was lovely and the last stanza was by far my favorite.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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;You've captured how "gray matter" actually works. This is thought provoking, especially how our brief lifespans compel us to "exploit" our gifts...
Well done.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Will not pretend, i've had to read this twice and still need to return. Have made notes because i want to explore your words.. and thus, will return, third time 'fortunate'

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"In the synapse repose surfeit dreams..pulses of flickering imaginative reality." the core- the quantum explosion, the essence...incredible image- neurons or hands reaching out to pass the spark of creation as Michelangelo depicted? Yes, Both. Perfect words, elegant, evocative, capturing the uncapturable genesis of inspiration. Brilliant. Thank you for this!

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Phill Oz O'fee

3 Months Ago

Wow - my face is turning red - blushing or what! :-) Thank you ...
Annette Pisano Higley

3 Months Ago

So sweet! You are a stellar talent and are very welcome...
There's always something to learn in your writes. In this case, it reminded me of my first year in med school, I literally hated neuroanatomy lol ;p
Love how you ended this one. Give more often than I take... makes me wonder if this really happens still...
Excellent write.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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