Jigsaw

Jigsaw

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Need one more piece to finish the picture ...........

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Jigsaw




On reflection

My life was formed from many parts

Anomalous shapes

Big or small in different natures

Picture learning

At the beginning of my existence

Experimental times

During awkward adolescence days

Always growing

Searching knowledge inside and out

Yearning compassion

In fellowship or loving partner

Forty trillion

Average cells in the human body

Making up

This jigsaw of casing and lowly soul

Only lacks

Just one dynamic missing piece

For conclusion

To fill up a darken lonely space

Your love

To complete a picture within my heart


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2017


© 2017 Phill Oz O'fee



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The ending of this poem has an optimistic ending and as I try desperately to relate, I know in my heart that I will never find the missing piece I need to live. Even though I have a wonderful boyfriend and a good job, I am merely existing. I yearn for what it is like to live and this poem gives me -some- hope that maybe one day I will find it. Something to make my life complete. This poem is very touching.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the kind review - and - also to say; just knowing you have read and appreciated my wri.. read more



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I like the overall rhythm of the poem...sounds strong and very musical! My favourite lines will be-
" Experimental times
During awkward adolescence days
Always growing
Searching knowledge inside and out"

I like the optimistic end to this journey of self discovery...

Posted 1 Day Ago


Poignant poem with great language, form, flow, cadence and imagery. Lovely metaphor-“jigsaw of casing and lowly soul”. We all search for that missing piece “to complete a picture within”. Some never find it. I hope you find yours my friend. Kudos!

Posted 1 Week Ago


The ending of this poem has an optimistic ending and as I try desperately to relate, I know in my heart that I will never find the missing piece I need to live. Even though I have a wonderful boyfriend and a good job, I am merely existing. I yearn for what it is like to live and this poem gives me -some- hope that maybe one day I will find it. Something to make my life complete. This poem is very touching.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for the kind review - and - also to say; just knowing you have read and appreciated my wri.. read more
My puzzle is complete
some pieces have faded a bit
lack of
circulation ..diminished
the true color of life
Although I am puzzled
more and more each day
still
the puzzle is a complete..

Interesting introspection and sharing....

Jazzy


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks for your review Jazzy - much appreciated!
J. J.  Nightingale

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome kind Sir....... J.J.
although my ending is different...the pictures always half drawn...you sure catch the history of growing up, learning life...and living it...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Jacob - nice review! I'm still waiting for my ending ....

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Added on September 22, 2017
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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I am caught in a time spiral of confusion; that period we all experience between birth and death. Somewhere inside hides a poet, writer, lyricist and/or whatever, laying dormant and suppressed by s.. more..

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