Allusive illusion

Allusive illusion

A Poem by Phill Oz O'fee
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Dream lover …...

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Allusive illusion



Checked my dream catcher today

And found it empty once again

And the reverie of love’s possibility

Had not been caught up in its mesh


Although grateful nightmare visions

Have been sieved out of my mind

It would have been nice to discover

Amour prospects lay within its net


Sweet imagines have been allusive

And just illusions it would appear

But I maintain an optimistic outlook

Those expectations will be revealed


Perhaps unconscious psyche filters

Have been positioned far too high

Though seeking a beloved partner

Is a charge not impossible to wish


So resetting this spider web charm

I lay me once more down to sleep

In expectation that in the morning

I discover you hiding in my dreams


Copyright @ Phillozofee 2018

© 2018 Phill Oz O'fee


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Discover you hiding in my dream...ooh.. Phill such a sweet poem... and wishful thinking...sweet and adorable... :)
I do wish and pray you find her next to you not only in dreams... :)
Everyone deserve to find that love...that kind which makes our toes and lips curl into smiles...


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you kindly - I'm looking for the daughter of Nedar, who is a member of Theseus court! Or perh.. read more
Ardra

5 Years Ago

Mmm love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.... ;) .. and may the universe bring Helena who.. read more



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Expectation kills at times but it also brings us hope. To find "the one" is a wish many of us have. we wake up to reality in search for the one we met in our dreams. Even if we don't find them we still hold onto that thread of hope.

I love this poem Phill.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Magnificent! ... however abortive the situation might appear, it leaves one pondering the writer's optimism!...great write!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Optimism is the key - for dreams are the mystic fuel of our inspirations - :-)
Nankya Yudaya

5 Years Ago

Couldn't agree more
"So resetting this spider web charm
I lay me once more down to sleep
In expectation that in the morning
I discover you hiding in my dreams"

This is so wonderfully true! I can relate to the emotion behind this poem. I love the desire to have some tangible feeling of love and the reliance of a dream catcher to fulfill the longing.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Lovely review my friend - thank you so much! :-)
Surely with such alluring words, she will be compelled to live forever in your world of dreams. Superbly written, my friend.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your comments - very much appreciated - :-)
DIVYA

5 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
one romantic poem wherein love is the core of one's existence

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your interesting review - :-)
Pondering, the possibilities of love and affection from a dream catcher. But, also finding out. Your wicked nightmares have gone. Loved it! Giving hope, peace and happiness. Bits at a time. So you're not overwhelmed.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you Dee - for the review and kind comments - :-)
Discover you hiding in my dream...ooh.. Phill such a sweet poem... and wishful thinking...sweet and adorable... :)
I do wish and pray you find her next to you not only in dreams... :)
Everyone deserve to find that love...that kind which makes our toes and lips curl into smiles...


Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you kindly - I'm looking for the daughter of Nedar, who is a member of Theseus court! Or perh.. read more
Ardra

5 Years Ago

Mmm love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind.... ;) .. and may the universe bring Helena who.. read more
Had a few days like that > No dreams to dream - no flashes of inspiration

I am living in a flurry of action > do this that and lots more > before I have started on the first

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review .. :-)

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Added on June 21, 2018
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Phill Oz O'fee
Phill Oz O'fee

Winchester, Hampshire, England, United Kingdom



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