no one ever gave me the right

 I’ll wait for you

To crawl into the crevices of my brain

Collapse into thousands of

Pure white feathers

And sink into the black resin that's

Been coating every unstable wall

of torn flesh

Reviews

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very nice pieta prayer. it s very gentle and very calm. even if this sad. i love it

[Samoda]

Short and concise, yet so powerful.... I love the wording in this poem.

[A. Amos]

To crawl into the crevices of my brain
Very strong line above, you are gifted writer and looking forward to read more of your work

[Blue]

Strong imagery with a powerful message.

[Ruth]

Makes me think of release, after the burden of life x

[Inda]

Love the immagery here, waiting for someone to get under your skin and not cause more dammage, you hope. Great piece!

[Simon Welsh]

Reminds me of the Dancing Hoods lyric 'I'm gonna hold on till it all gets torn away'. Short and sweet.

[kublakhan27]

This brings so many different images to mind...the possibilities for interpretation seem endless here. A lot of food for thought in a short piece, well done :)

[Mark]

I feel guilt, a need to be punished maybe? tar and feathering a mind is pretty intense.