Black Pools Illuminated

Black Pools Illuminated

A Poem by Phoen-ix

Absinthe
A sinners
rotting teeth
Hollowed out bones
Famine
A vermins feast
A blood moon over a raging sea
132 lost,
angry beasts

© 2017 Phoen-ix



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VIVID, TERSE, EXEMPLARY

these are
my few
words.
Awesome!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


I like the imagery.....I like the musicality.....I don't know what to make of this, though......is it supposed to be absurd? It does elicit a bit of a chuckle.....but at the same time some fearful chills ("blood moon over a raging sea"....creepy). Well done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


A very 19th century Gallic feel to this that I like.

Posted 4 Months Ago


I like the tone of this one a lot, feels like an abrupt ending, but that may be because i wanted more to happen. great job!

Posted 5 Months Ago



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Toronto, Canada



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