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Time Sheds Light

Time Sheds Light

A Poem by Melinda McQueen

Time Sheds Light

 

A royal clock ticks

As its hands refuse to slumber.

An order mimicked,

Hungry for the next number.

 

Casting long shadows

In its own right,

It ever follow--

Time sheds light.

 

Waiting for no one,

It charges ahead.

Its work never done,

From sun-up to finding its bed.

 

Breaking forth from darkness

Into dawn, forsaking the night,

Leading the way in its harness--

Time sheds light.

 

Good or bad, its passage in haste,

It’s there for everything.

To break, to heal, to birth, to finely age,

Holding all in its wings.

 

As souls close in on eternity,

Let’s strive to make the greatest of life

By showing Christ in a way all can see--

Using our time to shed the Light.


© 2017 Melinda McQueen



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Time shedding tears. Now... that is a new concept. Even for you. But i do like where you're going with this. It's catchy. Truly catchy.

Posted 6 Days Ago


Melinda McQueen

15 Hours Ago

Thank you for reading. God bless.
I agree dear Melinda.
"As souls close in on eternity,
Let’s strive to make the greatest of life
By showing Christ in a way all can see--
Using our time to shed the Light."
We need to lead with concern, kindness and love. We need the light of hope and forgiveness. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Melinda McQueen

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your review.
Coyote Poetry

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome my friend.
wel,you better hurry Melinda,time is about up

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Melinda McQueen

2 Weeks Ago

Yep, this is true.
Forgot the rating score and again a fine piece writing,your time was well spent.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Melinda McQueen

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you for reading and leaving your review.
Time hmm,in poetry I've read about time in the abstract and diced into segments but never as the focus of the verse.Very nicely done!Time is our keeper and our releaser,did we infact invent time or did time invent us.Your verse stays right on track from start to finish.A suggestion to help the flow in the 3rd line of next to last stanza "To break,birth,heal and finely age"worked better for me.But then I'm no expert on poetry but I do write some interesting verse.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Melinda McQueen

2 Weeks Ago

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Added on September 19, 2017
Last Updated on September 20, 2017
Tags: Christ, light, life

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Melinda McQueen
Melinda McQueen

TX



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Hello, I'm Melinda from Texas. I want to be published but have had trouble. I'm hoping Writer's Cafe gets my name out there. I'm in a chair with Cerebral Palsy and writing is my outlet. I have found d.. more..

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