Winter Blues

Winter Blues

A Poem by Yellow Butterfly
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Japanese Tanka

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Awoke to darkness

Unsure what today will bring

How long this season

bestowed upon will it reign?

As this cold winter sets in..


© 2014 Yellow Butterfly



Author's Note

Yellow Butterfly
Inspired by Travis..... with a little tweeking along the way... :)

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The most beautiful winters I've known were in Poland. At night discs of ice formed on the lakes and were blown by the wind to the bank where they jingled like sleigh bells.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Though it may have less hours of sunlight than any other season, it is still extremely beautiful to me. I love winter. An enjoyable short poem, nice job butterfly :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Little sentences with a lot of meanings and really deep and I can view this poem from different angles.. Well written and thanks for sharing!

Posted 3 Years Ago


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was like that here 2 days ago:) Love it:)

Posted 3 Years Ago


reminds me of a day outside... in the dark forest... i can feel the chill down my spine... haha

Posted 3 Years Ago


A nice fun read. Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


I'm thinking of all the wild outdoor creatures whose lives quite literally hang in the balance from day to day, when the winter chill sets in and begins to bite hard !

A fitting reflective tribute, a fine poem YB !

Posted 3 Years Ago


As this cold winter sets in.. Beautifully written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Brrrrr!... be a scout... be prepared!... nice words here o yellow one, thanx for the read. (big smile!)

*bird*

Posted 3 Years Ago


This is a beautiful moment describing the season that a lot of folks are facing right now. Very nicely penned.

Posted 3 Years Ago



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